There's this boy and he's got me going insane
he gives me that on special feeling
a feeling I'm unable to explain
I declared my heart:his for the stealing
he told me I was his one special girl
and that no one could ever compare
I was elated, for he made my heart whirl
I needed this boy like I needed my air
The only guy able to give me that feeling
the one no amount of words could ever describe
he could make my heart jump to the ceiling
I was love-sick, and no medicine could be perscribed
I thought he was my only special guy
turns out he was just a cheat and a lie
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Kera, love in any form is the greatest thing in this world. i hope that even after all your troubles that you would continue to love him. in the way of forgiving him and moving on. if thats where its right now.
Kera, love in any form is the greatest thing in this world. i hope that even after all your troubles that you would continue to love him. in the way of forgiving him and moving on. if thats where its right now....
haha nahnah but yea this was a good sonnet i like the twist at the end sucks tho...rajah out
Kera, love in any form is the greatest thing in this world...just kidding i won't do that again haha. I liked your sonnet alot because your voice really stands out and their is tons of emotion behind it. My favorite lines were "my heart jump to the ceiling" and "I was love-sic, and no medicine could be prescribed." Those were great. Cheaters suck! But remember cheaters never win so...yeah...Great job!
i love this sonnet. very deep and gives me chicken skin i guess. very good. sonnet shows alot of love and sensation in it. very good job.
this was a really good sonnet. the sudden twist at the end was nice. the emotion in the paper is a nice touch too.
mr host copied the same thing i said
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